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DAVID LYNCH RABBITS

Contributed by alicewhite on Friday, 4th January 2013 @ 08:20:28 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

rabbits
rabbits
rabbits
it is still raining
who was on the phone?
hahahahahahahahhahahah

it has always been like that
when did you go out>?
i have known since i was seven
it happens all the time

ring ring ring ring ring ring ring ring
ring ring
----------------------------------
--------------------------------------------
there is no moon tonight
it looks like it is still raining
where was it exactly do you remember?
is it that late?

since then
and getting darker

###############

violinchello

open door
laughter
laughter
Laughter
mmmmmmmm
mmmm
and old worn rug
a dark cross
oh oh
somethings wrong
oh oh
the dark cross
lights blow out
wind dark
smiling teeth
swollen tongue
the socket drips
mmmmmmm
barbed wire
tearing open red
AND REVEALING
DARK ROOM BROKEN WINDOW
MMMMMMM
BAND AID OLD USED COTTON
GREEN TEAR VINAL KNIFE

OHOHOH

STEAM BLOOD BURN

#
OH UH OHHH
BALD CORE
BUGS WIGGLE ON THIER BACKS
LEGS HIGH CIELING DRIPS
COLD DISTANT
SIGN

MMMM
OH
OHOO
OHO
OH DISTANT SHIPS
DISTANT SHIPS
DISTANT SHIPS

OH OH OHHH
OH OH
OH
OHOH

MOVING WING
FINGERS OLD SKIN O

OHHOH
OHH
OHHHOH
OH
SMOKE OIL HEAT MIRROR
SMEAR OF BLOOD
EYE OPENS DARKNESS

APPLAUSE
===
-0---

I SAW IT TOO
I AM NOT SURE

I WENT EARLIER
WHEN IT WAS JUST LIGHT

I NEED TO TELL YOU SOMETHING

IT WAS RED
DID HE SAY ANYTHIN?

i COULD NOT DO ANYTHING?

NOONE CAN KNOW ABOUT THIS

----
iT HAPPENED TO ME ONLY ONCE

its past midnight!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

APPLAUSE
APPLZUSE
HAHAHA

EARS TWITCH

ALL DAY,
THERE IS SOMETHING HERE
IT HAPPENED LIKE THAT EARLIER

WHO COULD HAVE KNOWN?

[[[[[
BLAH BLAH BLAH SUPERIOR
CREATOR

i HEARD IT TOOO

DO NOT FORGET WHAT I HAVE TOLD YOU

HORNHORN HORN SCREAM THUNDER ROAR ECHO

CLOSE DOOR
LOCK OUT

And then there it was
NO NOthing

well then it must be very dark--------

violin violin

it was the man in the green coat

I WONDER who I WILL BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE???????????????????????

Copyright © alicewhite ... [ 2013-01-04 20:20:28]
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Re: DAVID LYNCH RABBITS (User Rating: 1 )
by colinb on Friday, 8th February 2013 @ 04:36:43 PM AEST
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Enougher dark & great write Alice very creative

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