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Lost within myself
Contributed by
afraid_of_fear
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Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
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Lost within myself
Can’t let myself in
Can’t find my way out
I’m lost – without a doubt
Carry me away in your arms
And drop me from the highest point
Watch me, watch me fall
Watch me as I tumble
I’m tired of being this weary
Afraid of feeling that fear
Can’t wipe away
This forever-falling tear
A challenge, a battle, an on-going struggle
Everything’s become a blur
You smudged my view of life
Time stands still, time flies by, into it we dive
No longer does my heart beat
No longer do I cry tears
I cry blood, scream blood
I’m choking, spluttering, a headache’s flood
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Re: Lost within myself
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by Rachel on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:30:23 PM AEST
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| great poem, I can relate completly. |
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Re: Lost within myself
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:12:44 PM AEST
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| That was very good and very deep. Nicely write. |
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Re: Lost within myself
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by kittiekat on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 10:59:06 PM AEST
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| Very nice, i like it alot, and i know how that feels, good write. >^..^< |
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Re: Lost within myself
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by BlackFire9786 on
Saturday, 7th June 2003 @ 06:43:53 PM AEST
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| This was a great poem. Deep, but i can fully relate. Keep writing! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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