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invade me softly
Contributed by
dave84
on
Sunday, 30th December 2012 @ 11:05:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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the time will not begin
until we are done
every step you take
is a secret for my heart
they never understood us
they misunderstand the world
we have to keep them satisfied
until the day we die
you can touch my hand
but not my heart
my faith is blind
i dont want it to see
invade me softly
invade me like you know how
humanity is a sin
i'll use my brain to see
i need everybody to tell me
what you mean to me
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dave84
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2012-12-30 23:05:12]
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Re: invade me softly
(User Rating: 1 )
by HawLeeScreams on
Sunday, 30th December 2012 @ 11:16:24 PM AEST
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| This is really good. I enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: invade me softly
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by emystar on
Monday, 31st December 2012 @ 12:36:04 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
I really enjoyed this write.
Good job.
Blessings,
emy
Your uniquenes is refreshing.
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Re: invade me softly
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by joydeep_nath on
Monday, 31st December 2012 @ 12:53:40 AM AEST
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| amazing!!! perfectly done..love the way u say it with enough vagueness!! |
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Re: invade me softly
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by VRR on
Monday, 31st December 2012 @ 01:40:44 AM AEST
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| Amazing! |
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