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A year in review
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 29th December 2012 @ 05:33:10 PM in AEST
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Sheep, sleeping, ignorant.
Words I used to bring understanding, a failed approach at human interaction.
Love, forgiveness, understanding.
Things I forgot, for fear of being loved back.
Proper compliance, rules not to break.
Chains I left for myself, unable to see the objection in my actions.
By use of force I tried to change the my world around me.
Only to be left by the roadside, kicking rocks calling people blind.
This confusion is what they seek.
Seeking answers with more questions, while ignoring the problems at hand.
With love and unity, I seek to change my ways.
With proper understanding, I learnt to love myself.
Just lessons learned in the year two thousand and twelve.
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Re: A year in review
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th December 2012 @ 08:13:29 PM AEST
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Good work friend.
May 2013 be the best year yet.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: A year in review
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th December 2012 @ 09:14:33 PM AEST
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| For we live to see another day.
Though some people don't think this way.
For the hopes have died about 2013.
But your poem brings some hope and makes 2013 more hopeful than ever. |
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