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The Last Flower
Contributed by
Whiskurz
on
Wednesday, 26th December 2012 @ 07:40:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I planted the worlds last flower
In the garden by the brook
Its beauty took my breath away
It only took one look
It's as precious as the finest gold
And jewels cannot compare
Nothing is quite as beautiful
As the flower I planted there
Its smell is like no other smell
That I have ever known
It's got to be God's pride and joy
The best He's ever sown
I covered this flower so carefully
As I placed it in the dirt
The tears I cried has quenched its thirst
But for me it only hurt
I planted the worlds last flower
Under skies of purest blue
It was hard for me to walk away
For the worlds last flower was you
Copyright ©
Whiskurz
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2012-12-26 19:40:06]
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Re: The Last Flower
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by dvtpdw on
Wednesday, 26th December 2012 @ 07:42:47 PM AEST
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| Wow! The feelings contained in this write drew deep down to my soul. The last lines brought tears to my eyes. It is wonderment, heart, and thought. Great, great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: The Last Flower
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by Kailas on
Wednesday, 26th December 2012 @ 09:20:57 PM AEST
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| This is truly amazing, very beautiful. Thanks for sharing :) |
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Re: The Last Flower
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by Lenny on
Thursday, 27th December 2012 @ 01:17:02 PM AEST
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| Beautiful!!! I enjoyed it very much!!! |
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Re: The Last Flower
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by Sasha on
Sunday, 13th January 2013 @ 10:15:07 AM AEST
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| Wow! very well written, perfectly expressed! |
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