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A Lover's Gaze
Contributed by
RealmX
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Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 03:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As I look into your eyes
My whole world comes alive
Set upon such a fair face
That can only shine with grace
Your lips are so cute when you pout
Makes me forget what I'm thinking about
Dislike of your nose is what you think
As I refute it with a subtle wink
You are most beautiful in my eyes
I see you and my heart doth flies
Softening my heart in many ways
Enjoying your presence through all these days
How can I stay irritated at you
When smiling and chuckling is what I do
Where have you been hiding away
I liked you despite what they had to say
You;re a light to the darkness of this world
Encouraging my feelings out like a flag unfurled
I'm glad I met you under that cold Autumnal sky
Now I consider myself a very lucky guy
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RealmX
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2003-05-12 15:35:00]
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Re: A Lover's Gaze
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by Ash on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:01:34 PM AEST
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| Too cute. Hope you read it to whoever you wrote it for. |
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Re: A Lover's Gaze
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:20:22 PM AEST
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nice good write
Shari |
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Re: A Lover's Gaze
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:19:44 PM AEST
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| Great poem ... well written ... Jan |
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