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Judas kiss me
Contributed by
alicewhite
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Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 04:43:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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kiss me Judas
Judas kiss me
the apple tastes sweet
once blind
i now see
im ripe and ready
im ready to reap
with your kiss
resurect me
come harvest your sheep
through my trials
and the tribulation
ive suffered
with no sleep
crown me with thorns
and my halo
that i seek
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Re: Judas kiss me
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by Waynster on
Friday, 21st December 2012 @ 05:35:39 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. |
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Re: Judas kiss me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 23rd December 2012 @ 12:30:56 AM AEST
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Dear Alice White,
I already know you know, Iscariot, betrayal and the opposite.
So very doctrinaire, somehow left withering with guilt inside, passed down generation after generation, creeds, culture after culture, or so many different cultures, all passed down, again and again, yet no one asking why. Wonderful poem! Take it from someone born in a devout catholic family who from the get go believed spiritually but not categorically the book written by --- who knows, intellectuals who came and went and tried to spread wonderful logic every couple hundred years or so. oh but Judas, the guilty party, someone got to him. Thank you - like your writing a lot, feel as though it's worth reading.
Peace! |
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