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I Promise
Contributed by
northernlights
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Sunday, 16th December 2012 @ 05:37:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
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For you my Father
A Candle,
For all life now that I would want you to see.
For your empty place in our family!
For the years of Wisdom missed.
A light to show you the grandchildren you never saw,
Their achievements and zest for life.
And for them missing all that you could have taught them.
And a flame that burns with warmth of our hearts to you.
A steadfast spirit of family.
For you my Friends,
A Candle,
For all of what you brought to my life.
For the times we had together,
For the years of laughter missed.
A light to show you the moments that I wish you were there
All that you brought to my life.
Your zest for life.
For all the times you were there for me,
And a flame that burns with the memories
As we walked side by side.
A flame that promises you
That in this time of celebration,
You are not forgotten!
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Re: I Promise
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by spud on
Sunday, 16th December 2012 @ 07:39:24 AM AEST
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Hi Anna,
A fine tribute and dedication. No need for
further comment, your poem says it all.
Tommy
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Re: I Promise
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th December 2012 @ 01:21:39 PM AEST
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Yes, *sigh*, what Tommy said. You definitely sum it up with excellence and beauty. This is the way I wanted to write but couldn't because of the numbness. Thank you ever so much.
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Re: I Promise
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by shelby on
Sunday, 16th December 2012 @ 04:32:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful am wiping tears
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Re: I Promise
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by RowenM on
Tuesday, 18th December 2012 @ 09:02:50 AM AEST
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| Great poem, beautifully written. :) |
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