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shooting words as weapons..

Contributed by stateofgray on Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Plain and simple, get the hell away
I want you gone, look at me, can’t you see
Your presence makes me seethe and if I may
So politely ask, get the hell away, Please!

I have heard your words already
I heard you, and they became in mind assimilated
And oozed in and out of my ears and soul
Now I feel ready to defiantly, but indifferently embrace an inevitable destiny.. belated

You have reminded me, thanks a lot
Of everything, bittersweet though, I ever wanted to be
And in a despairing web of thoughts I am caught
And reminded of an old destiny I thought was inevitability me.

Enough! Look at me, with my eyes I beseech you-
To stop talking- get away, stop reminding
Can you not take the look in my eyes as a clue?
Your words are slicing weapons, they don’t care, I close my eyes, I wish I was blind.

You have already depleted my energy and will
The only way to forget all this and recover myself
Is if your presence is abolished; killed
Lessened, by times unnoticeable stealth.

I like to believe my entity is a forbidden, rusted lock.
I hate the fact, however, you are this vexing and imposing key
That, I’ll admit, unexpectedly opened the forbidden but Knocked
Everything I protected so no one could see… but me.

You’re not going away yet, I hate being putty in anyone’s hands
I am not weak and easy- I am a guy!
You make me feel cheap and….
I cant hide it, you got me good. I am a coward- I sigh.

Listen, last chance go, just leave, WAIT, STOP!
I guess you beat me, you weren’t playing a game, but you got me right in the zone.
I need your help, I’m afraid, your words hurt, but don’t stop.
I know I need you, I hope you’ll be here, I’m scared of the inevitable, I don’t want to be alone

Copyright Â© stateofgray ... [ 2003-05-12 11:35:00]
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Re: shooting words as weapons.. (User Rating: 1 )
by kittiekat on Tuesday, 13th May 2003 @ 04:23:10 PM AEST
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awww....this poem is sooooo sweet!! i love it!! I like how you made it seem negative in the end, but put ur true feelings in it in the end as well. Good write. >^..^<

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