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Fate
Contributed by
banjosandwitch
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Monday, 10th December 2012 @ 08:59:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Fate
Sitting searching for a job
Any job, the perfect job
I strike up a conversation
Wow! Breaks on! Crash impending!
She is so, so nice
I give her my card, nonchalantly
I show her my empire online
Fate takes me by surprise
I’ve sat next to her for over an hour
And didn’t even notice her, what a fool
I smile and make chit chat
I like her, she’s cool
I’d like to see her again
She has my number, will she call it?
Who knows only the gods of fate?
They hold my heart in their hands
That was a happy encounter
Right place, right time, fate
What will happen next?
I’ll keep you posted, smile
By banjosandwitch 07/12/12
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banjosandwitch
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2012-12-10 08:59:12]
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Re: Fate
(User Rating: 1 )
by Chicken on
Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 01:08:31 AM AEST
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| Perfectly describes how that nervous giddy feeling you get in your gut when you think you are going to get that new job or when you have met the "perfect" girl....I like it. Well written |
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Re: Fate
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 11th December 2012 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST
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| Keep me posted, great to hear of happy encounters that's the real joy of this season. |
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Re: Fate
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by PreciousKitten on
Wednesday, 12th December 2012 @ 10:51:27 AM AEST
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| i hope this happens to me. i want many wishes and many blessings for you. i love it. keep writing. |
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