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Beautiful Girl
Contributed by
hot-shot
on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Beautiful girl
I don’t care,
Who you are, where you from.
Beautiful girl,
I don’t care about your past
Even don’t care about your status.
Beautiful girl,
I only want your love
Because you are my heart,
You are my soul.
Beautiful girl,
I can do anything for your love
Even lay my life for your love.
Beautiful girl,
How much I love you,
I even don’t know, but can’t live without you
Beautiful girl,
Please! Come into my life,
And make my ruined life like a paradise.
Beautiful girl,
Please! Come into my life,
Come into my life.
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2003-05-12 09:35:00]
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:40:35 AM AEST
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| A good one. Just be carefull not to get cheated( ahahahha!! just joking) |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Firehark on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 01:37:53 PM AEST
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| Very well writen. |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 09:46:06 PM AEST
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nice poem... it infringes a lil into the type of song a boy band would sing though.. something i wouldve have written when i was a lil younger
-Sid |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by hot-shot on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:18:08 PM AEST
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| dear friend you r right tht this poem gives a little bit sound like tht but it not a whole like that it is my own creation ......thanks anyway |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by hot-shot on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:19:47 PM AEST
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dear friend you r right tht this poem gives a little bit sound like tht but it not a whole like that it is my own creation ......thanks anyway
(zuhaib Ayaz-----hot-shot). |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 14th May 2003 @ 05:11:58 AM AEST
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| Nice piece of work.....Rohail |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th May 2003 @ 09:51:36 AM AEST
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nice one !!!
wish i cud rite liked dat
newayz 3 cheers for Mr. Hotshot
wish u good luck for ur beautiful gal
P:S
care to tell us who iz she? |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 16th May 2003 @ 12:34:30 PM AEST
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| nice really i liked da way it is written it touched ma heart...i want to send poem to ma gf if mr hot shot permit me to do that..(mohsin) |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 10:24:15 PM AEST
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| this is beautiful:) warm welcome to ypdc too! sorry i didn't see this lovely poem when first it was posted.. ~hugs nessa |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 10:53:34 PM AEST
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| That's so touching...so passionate...so...sensual. Mr. Ayaz, what made you write it? (52 reads-whoa now THAT's a lotta reads) |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 11th August 2003 @ 05:51:51 PM AEST
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This is heart-warming... hope she reads it..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by hot-shot on
Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 03:14:05 PM AEST
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just want 2 thnx ...hope dat she wil read it
any way thnx again -Jenni
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Re: Beautiful Girl
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 25th April 2004 @ 02:12:09 AM AEST
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Simple but fervent. Maybe I only like it because it expresses my own feelings too...
Well done.
Andrew |
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