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What Has Happened?
Contributed by
Punkrocknemo
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Saturday, 8th December 2012 @ 08:05:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Who have I become?
Why do I feel so glum?
When did this start?
What is happening to me?
Why wont God just let me see,
What i need to do to set me free.
I try to follow him, but all i do is sin.
Why cant i let go?
Even if it is slow.
No matter what I try, all i do is cry.
Should i just say bye?
Sometimes I lie and I say that i'm fine.
Even when i want to die.
What is there to do?
I've already talked to you.
Just show me a sign,
instead of making me wait in a line.
Should I trust my heart?
Even when I get hit by a dart?
I'm so confused, my life is just on cruise.
Why is it so hard to follow you?
All I want to do is stay true.
God, I need your guidance.
So please just lend me a hand,
instead of leaving me in sand.
~Jessica R. Coy~
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Re: What Has Happened?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th December 2012 @ 02:06:57 AM AEST
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I wonder what you mean, I say it to myself too.
write, write, no right, don't say only wrong. resilient resilient is not some hood, there is no robin hood, that sees the forest through the trees. Don't believe me, like I know, because I don't. But I believe in you.
I love your prose. Think about asking. Working hard to know.
I will come to you. No, it's no magic.
It never is, being bold.
I mean this is a really good piece of writing., the question mark at the end. Do not give up, for the sake of others it says... simplicity is genuine.
Peace! |
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Re: What Has Happened?
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by MrsJackson on
Sunday, 9th December 2012 @ 10:46:25 AM AEST
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This is powerful! Always a struggle, not to follow God (That's easy) but to get life right. Acknowledge Him Always and everything else will work out in the end Amen!
God Bless You! |
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Re: What Has Happened?
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by mchall629 on
Sunday, 9th December 2012 @ 02:00:10 PM AEST
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| I too struggle with the very same questions and tendencies. Thanks for sharing with us.. Keep your head up.. |
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