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Where the eagles lament
Contributed by
flavellm
on
Thursday, 6th December 2012 @ 04:08:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I clambered over the
mossy boulder strewn land
towards the white cliffs
where the eagles lament
just to smell the sweet air,
and to watch the creeping dawns
young sun heave itself over the horizon,
I was there thinking of you.
By the red telephone box
I was sitting on the top bar
of a withered fence
There I witnessed
at close range
the malevolent gleam
in the spiteful eyes of a crow
perched with intent
perched with a plan
he whistled something
malicious about you
then flew away towards
the jagged remnants of
of an old cattle shed
By the red telephone box
I've been waiting for you.
When are you coming?
Copyright ©
flavellm
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2012-12-06 16:08:00]
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Re: Where the eagles lament
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by emystar on
Thursday, 6th December 2012 @ 08:14:41 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Where the eagles lament
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by northernlights on
Friday, 7th December 2012 @ 05:31:21 AM AEST
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| The sadness, lament, expectant waiting,and final declaration of pain all the ingredients of unrequited felt deeply in the words and all that lies behind them. |
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Re: Where the eagles lament
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by mchall629 on
Saturday, 8th December 2012 @ 11:21:36 AM AEST
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| Excellent. Very very nice. |
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Re: Where the eagles lament
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by Sasha on
Saturday, 8th December 2012 @ 08:49:15 PM AEST
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| This is such a lovely write! |
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Re: Where the eagles lament
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by Voyager on
Thursday, 13th December 2012 @ 07:38:38 AM AEST
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| The First stanza was excellent. Filled with great visual imagery, flowed very nicely. A very interesting poem overall. |
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Re: Where the eagles lament
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 12th June 2014 @ 08:15:18 PM AEST
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this is beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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