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Wish
Contributed by
steven_fenton1982
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Saturday, 1st December 2012 @ 06:17:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Wishes, like dreams, are without wings and they cannot fly.
Nor, can they become reality, without intervention.
We plant a seed, a wish, and we add our hopes.
But, without action, without care, we cannot grow.
Without food, a stomach can shrink. Without love, a heart can slow.
I feel so much for you, that blurted words, from thoughts so full, cannot suffice.
I am without explanation, as to how I truly feel, as how I truly feel is unknown.
Like a new-born thought that is absorbed by the heart before it can crawl.
Made impossible to comprehend by the complexity of an increasing heartbeat.
I find myself fearing not what I say, but, what I do not say.
As it is what I do not say, that is the thing I would like to say the most.
Within my mind, my brain, my heart, I know there are pieces.
Pieces, that when put together will complete a picture, that I wish I could explain with words.
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2012-12-01 18:17:11]
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Re: Wish
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by mchall629 on
Saturday, 1st December 2012 @ 07:16:04 PM AEST
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Re: Wish
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by Fluttermouse on
Sunday, 2nd December 2012 @ 01:02:43 PM AEST
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Re: Wish
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by deusdeira on
Wednesday, 5th December 2012 @ 07:39:55 AM AEST
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| Now THAT is a well written poem. Conveying feelings and lack of the ability to express yourself to the person you love. Quite ironic really that poetry often conveys the very feelings we seek to hide from a certain someone. Beautiful though. I felt it. |
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