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Gray Eyes
Contributed by
winterone
on
Wednesday, 28th November 2012 @ 12:37:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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This sea rolls coldly. I shall soar
High above that headland there,
And leave behind this scarlet shore,
And all its necromantic air.
My lover sent me ranging far,
To distant Futures, silent Pasts,
I move with witch and avatar,
Beyond the nighted frozen vasts.
My lover’s eyes like burning strobes
Have pierced me with her magic art,
Her eyes are gray and potent globes
That long have chained my wayward heart.
The sea rolls coldly. I shall soar
High above that headland there,
And leave all as it was before,
With all its necromantic air.
Copyright ©
winterone
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2012-11-28 12:37:43]
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Re: Gray Eyes
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by ValDohren on
Wednesday, 28th November 2012 @ 01:45:56 PM AEST
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Beautifully written, well crafted write.
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Re: Gray Eyes
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by Facade on
Monday, 3rd December 2012 @ 12:46:47 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed this read! Great work. |
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Re: Gray Eyes
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by softlyfalling on
Sunday, 17th March 2013 @ 03:37:42 AM AEST
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| You have such an elegant command of language! This is a lovely lyrical poem, and just arcane enough to compel avid consideration. Frankly, i would not change one single thing. |
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Re: Gray Eyes
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by Maylaur on
Wednesday, 20th March 2013 @ 10:45:00 PM AEST
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| Awesome piece here. Love! |
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