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Your Eyes
Contributed by
Wiccan
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Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Your eyes are like water
Your eyes are like rain
I could stare into them forever
I love how the sun twinkles in them
Just as it does with water
Like a lake in high noon
When the birds sing their songs
And things are just too loud to focus
I cannot focus on the thing I love most
Like staring into your eyes
Your eyes are like water
Your eyes are like rain
I could stare into them forever
That is, if you stop blinking.
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Wiccan
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Re: Your Eyes
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 05:57:34 AM AEST
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good poem,, ending is cute
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Re: Your Eyes
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:22:02 AM AEST
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Lovely poem, I agree with Shari cute ending.
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Re: Your Eyes
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 03:30:46 PM AEST
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Haha, I liked this very descriptive thus creating lots of imagery. Ending made me laugh.
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