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Hotel Room
Contributed by
richardworts
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Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Hotel room
Fence against the cold
Prison of white brick
Hoard of loneness
A maze of melancholy textures spinning webs of depression
Walls suffocating joy, smothering hope
Cradling fear for my consumption
Eye the door bound in apathy
Faith dreary ebbs to endless weeks
No promise tide to wash sadness shore
Spell cast, this room tangles fate
Through window light my soul anointed,
a pledge of innocence of the future
Yet poised like a guillotine the raised window blind threatens autism’s eternal darkness
In place of its swollen promise
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richardworts
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2003-05-12 01:05:00]
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Re: Hotel Room
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by shelby on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 10:24:05 AM AEST
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wow this is great!!yet its sad. I love the images here.
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Re: Hotel Room
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:51:15 AM AEST
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you captured that feeling of helplessness in your words - nice write
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