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No Dark Night
Contributed by
Contralogicus
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Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Contradictory to popular belief,
There will never be any relief,
For the magical dreams,
You have, one seems,
To transform into true,
Revelation, that once you,
Awake within this musical space,
Get taken back to the time and place,
You first saw her shining eyes,
Watery crystals imbued with sighs,
Pupils dilated, lovely in the light,
Never alone, not a dark night.
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2003-05-12 00:05:00]
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Re: No Dark Night
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 06:06:03 AM AEST
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beautiful
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Re: No Dark Night
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 18th May 2003 @ 11:38:00 AM AEST
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| short and with a simple rhyme scheme, but the language you use is beautiful, vivid and enchanting. another great write, keep them coming, Kate x |
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