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Eclipse

Contributed by ValDohren on Saturday, 10th November 2012 @ 05:10:11 AM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry

Whilst looking up towards the sky
I saw a wondrous sight
For in the beauteous heavens above
The day turned into night

The moon was dancing with the sun
Fixed in a long embrace -
A lovely courtship had begun
Up there in silent space

Suspended high in dark display
As one, entwined in love
Against the black and sombre sky
Their backdrop set above

They kissed so long and tenderly
Wrapped in a sweet romance -
Before my eyes they ballet`d in
A graceful cosmic dance

The darkened void then set a scene
A truly splendid thing
As from their heav`nly union shone
A shimm`ring diamond ring

The daylight then returned in full
As, slow, they moved apart
Their marriage thus surrendered to
Reveal the sun`s bright heart

Copyright © ValDohren ... [ 2012-11-10 05:10:11]
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Re: Eclipse (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th November 2012 @ 01:18:54 AM AEST
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Look, if they want to do woopi in space, that's fine, but I was enjoying the sunlight that day! wink

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Seriously, though, as with all your work I really like this one too

Thank you very much,

Tim

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