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Mental meltdown

Contributed by jennyjen on Monday, 5th November 2012 @ 08:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

THIS ISN'T ME
WHO AM I?
THE WORDS YOU SAID TO ME
THE LOVE YOU TOOK FROM THEE
I'M NOTHING BUT A BUZZ IN THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD
I'M NOTHING BUT THE MISTAKE YOU WISH YOU NEVER MADE
I THOUGHT I WAS YOUR FRIEND
IT WASN'T HOW IT SEEMED
THE ONE YOU CARED FOR
THE ONE WHO WAS ALWAYS THERE
MY MIND LED ME IN THE WRONG DIRECTION
THE DIRECTION OF DESTRUCTION
LOVE IS A BLACK HOLE
SUCKING UP EVERY GOOD IN ME
TAKING ALL THE THOUGHTS OF THEE
THE WORDS BURIED IN MY HEART
HOW YOU NEVER CARED
HOW YOU HATED ME
HOW MY FACE DISGUISED YOU
MY APOLOGY THIS WASN'T MEANT TO BE
I'M SORRY FOR THE THINGS I THOUGHT WE'D BE
A MISTAKE I'LL NEVER MAKE AGAIN
THE THOUGHTS I'LL NEVER THINK AGAIN
THIS IS ME
THIS IS JEN

Copyright © jennyjen ... [ 2012-11-05 20:42:52]
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Re: Mental meltdown (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 01:43:49 AM AEST
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I felt the anger and pain in this one. Writing is a good soul cleanse! Just a suggestion, Im sure you wanted it this way, but your poem and the style in which it was written(very good) conveyed your message well, I have a hard time reading all caps but Im like that with everything:)

Michelle

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