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The differnce of dreams and reality
Contributed by
LetYourFeelingsOut
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Monday, 5th November 2012 @ 10:54:08 AM in AEST
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Overused sayings float in my mind
As i hear voices saying it will be fine
I look at my face still tear streaked and scarred
The room is so dark I wish you were here
Chills crawl up my spine It feels so cold
Metal on skin I feel it slide
From the top of my neck to the tips of my toes
I awake in my room
Startled and scared
It was just a dream i wasnt reilly there!
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Re: The differnce of dreams and reality
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by jennyjen on
Monday, 5th November 2012 @ 10:24:48 PM AEST
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| this is good... great job |
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Re: The differnce of dreams and reality
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 6th November 2012 @ 01:50:11 AM AEST
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I am glad it was just a dream but ughhhh what a scary dream to have! Iv been having some ugly nightmares the past several months. Thank goodness for waking moments right! Nicely done(shivers)
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