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Trust in you
Contributed by
NikaShortyyCakeFolsom
on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 05:03:52 PM in AEST
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You who searches for the land of dreams until everyone has caved your name into their hearts
The smile which has overcome sadness
Can i put my trust in you?
Though there was no end,
I still looked for it
At times i would get lost
My wounds and my losses,
I'll someday turn them into a glow around me
Regrets will never get the better of me ,
cause i know i have wings
I feel like i can go anywhere with you
Within a destiny that isn't a coincidence
I will believe in your miracles
As you search for the paradise of dreams
I want to watch you run,
you who are proud and know no tarnish
Can i put my trust in you?
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NikaShortyyCakeFolsom
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2012-11-03 17:03:52]
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Re: Trust in you
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 08:36:07 PM AEST
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good vision, I really liked it. to stop and think, we all got regrets, isn't that enough --- well not always. honesty and charity, when they truly are two sides of the same coin are things one can trust in. i'm guessing that's the glow you prescribe in this lovely piece.
Well done, and thanks!
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Re: Trust in you
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by ValDohren on
Sunday, 4th November 2012 @ 06:46:08 AM AEST
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| Lovely thought-provoking write. |
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