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A Walk Through Paradise

Contributed by ValDohren on Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 05:59:16 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I close my eyes to find a place
In diff`rent time and diff`rent space
And in imagination find
A cloistered arbour for my mind
Where thought may there be unconfined

Then in my dreams a path I take
As in a trance, yet wide awake,
To see the world with open eyes
Its glist`ning sands and azure skies -
I take a walk through Paradise

Suspended there reflecting deep
Where time is lost, immersed in sleep,
A sleep of ages long since passed
As on the sea of change were cast
All things which then were reckoned fast

Above all earthly cares to soar
Beyond the hurts I there endure
To see a sweet and perfect land
Where sunbeams dance upon my hand -
Where peace and love I understand

And there before my eyes I see
Such beauty that could never be
Revealed in places fixed below
As set before me all aglow
Such wonders ever outward flow

So on I walk beyond the veil
Where joys untold yet e`er prevail
And through the mist of blindness see
Whatever be revealed to me -
In Paradise forever be

Copyright © ValDohren ... [ 2012-11-03 05:59:16]
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Re: A Walk Through Paradise (User Rating: 1 )
by CommasCanSeperate on Sunday, 4th November 2012 @ 07:40:34 AM AEST
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Beautiful Write!

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