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Smile
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 08:16:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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you shed a tear
I wiped it dry
I caught it falling
from your eye
you tried to hide
so noone can see
but I fealt the tear
inside of me
I held you close
I said dont be sad
I said nothing at all
could be that bad
so much balled up
inside of you
you held it back
but it pushed threw
we talked so long
of now & then
I finally made you
smile again
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet)
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thehotshotpoet
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2012-11-01 20:16:25]
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Re: Smile
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 08:41:19 PM AEST
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This was a very sweet poem and it took me back to all the times someone had cheered me up or I helped to cheer someone else up.
Great flow and rhythm to this poem, I enjoyed it a lot!
Keep it up, friend |
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Re: Smile
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by emystar on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 09:55:26 PM AEST
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This is beautiful.
Great writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Smile
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by Facade on
Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 09:11:59 PM AEST
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| Great rhythm. I really enjoyed this write. |
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