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The Rose
Contributed by
ValDohren
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Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 05:49:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Calm the night and stilled the sea
Bathed in its tranquility
A fleeting glimpse of death`s repose
Gently stirred the sleeping rose
(But still too blind to understand
I let it wither in my hand)
The lifeless form fell to the earth
There again to find new birth
For withered though the rose may be
Its seed lives on eternally
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ValDohren
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2012-11-01 05:49:37]
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Re: The Rose
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 02:36:52 PM AEST
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| This is beautiful. |
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Re: The Rose
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by northernlights on
Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 04:12:12 AM AEST
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| I also think this could be the encapsulating image for letting love go and not recognising what you have. I love the image of the rose and this is beautifully written. |
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