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Invisible
Contributed by
dvtpdw
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Wednesday, 31st October 2012 @ 03:53:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Bright light blazes through my hand
Tomorrow can see the past clearly
So hard to keep up with the demand
I'm fading, turning invisible too quickly
I speak, but no sound emerges outward
I listen, but the words bounce off steel
What did I do for this to be my deserve
I watch as blank goes my ability to feel
So clear that life's colors can't adhere
So silent, sounds can't find an open door
I scream, scream; no one seems to hear
I slide down, down, through the floor
Days meld into the tryst of eternity
Nights blend into the black of the past
Months spin as they thrash around blindly
Years laugh as long shadows they cast
Each morning I rush to the nearest mirror
Searching for proof that I've solidified
Finding only empty space with no answer
Heartbeats in my ear tell me I've not died
Aware I exist, if only in my lonely world
My thoughts, words still carry a power
Around my dreams I'll remain safely curled
My soul will hold me strong in its tower
Outside might not see me as I walk by
Nor hear my heart scream as I yell
It doesn't matter how hard they try
I still have many stories left to tell
Though I'm invisible and no one hears
I've learned my lonely world has friends
I believe in myself; no room for the tears
I'll keep talking until their deafness ends
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dvtpdw
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2012-10-31 15:53:21]
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Re: Invisible
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 31st October 2012 @ 07:39:43 PM AEST
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Very powerful words and message.
I can certainly RELATE.
Great write.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Invisible
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by NightMareShoGun on
Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 02:52:30 PM AEST
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| very powerful words |
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Re: Invisible
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by shereal_14 on
Monday, 5th November 2012 @ 07:18:05 PM AEST
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| Very powerful write...had me in tears at first, and admittedly even at the end, yet it has given me strength...you have given me strength by writing this powerful poem. So thank you so much for sharing. |
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Re: Invisible
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by desire on
Friday, 30th November 2012 @ 09:16:52 PM AEST
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| Amazing, powerful, kudosfor a great write |
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Re: Invisible
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by IamM on
Monday, 11th February 2013 @ 11:39:32 AM AEST
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| This is an amazing write. A lot of powerful images and personification. It definitely keeps the reader on their toes as they advance each line and I definitely could feel a relation to the message being portrayed. Thank you so much for sharing. |
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