|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Ode To A Lost Love
Contributed by
ValDohren
on
Monday, 29th October 2012 @ 05:55:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
|
"Oh sweet breath of eternal life
Dance ever `pon her silent breast
Released from pain and worldly strife
The one I love is laid to rest"
Her flaxen hair, like golden corn
Fell soft about her lifeless face
And round her shoulders to adorn
As limp she lay in death`s embrace
Still young, the bloom of youth today
Her life had barely yet begun
But all too soon to fade away
No more to dance beneath the sun
No more to laugh in sweet delight
Nor skip through pastures, wild and free
Nor hear the nightingales sing bright
In pure and perfect harmony
"I`ll ne`er forget her tender smile
Nor yet her face, so sweet and fair
Her gentle kisses to beguile
I`ll cherish every thought of her"
The teardrops glistened on his cheeks
Like stars plucked from the darkened skies
He held her hand, no more to speak
Then gently kissed her still, cold eyes
Copyright ©
ValDohren
... [
2012-10-29 05:55:54]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Ode To A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by elle on
Monday, 29th October 2012 @ 08:35:25 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Hi :)
I must say I really love your gentle, soft, ethereal touch.
elle |
|
|
Re: Ode To A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th October 2012 @ 11:24:58 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow sad. :( Beautifully written though. |
|
|
Re: Ode To A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by SanctifyingSarah on
Tuesday, 30th October 2012 @ 08:43:40 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| This is a beautiful poem. I can really feel the pain of the speaker by the way the poem is written. Great job! |
|
|
Re: Ode To A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st November 2012 @ 07:40:01 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| beautiful |
|
|
Re: Ode To A Lost Love
(User Rating: 1 )
by NightMareShoGun on
Friday, 2nd November 2012 @ 02:17:28 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| and lots of generosity |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
