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Bright Flame
Contributed by
ValDohren
on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 09:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My love, my love, no scented flower
Could smell so sweet there in my bower -
No stars could yet adorn the night
Nor sun, nor moon, e`er shine so bright
As that which brings me love`s delight
For that which brings me love`s delight
Shines forth from you to feed my sight -
A love that never shall depart
A tender longing to impart
Bright flame that burns within my heart
Bright flame that burns within my heart
O let us not be set apart -
Stay close my love, a vigil keep
Upon my soul, which slumbers deep
So deep as in eternal sleep
So deep as in eternal sleep
That I no more shall ever weep -
O love that shines within your eyes
A love that neither wilts nor dies
A love that nothing e`er denies
A love that nothing e`er denies
The greatest gift, the greatest prize
That I shall cherish through all time
Shall so extol as bells that chime
My love for you is so sublime
My love for you is so sublime
That nought there is I could not climb -
You are the angel by my side
Forever there shall you abide
My light, my heart, my flowing tide
My life, my heart, my flowing tide …..
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ValDohren
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2012-10-28 09:00:18]
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Re: Bright Flame
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by ArdRi79 on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 10:27:25 AM AEST
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I like the way the last line of each verse is the first line of the next verse. It really creates an impact in the end.
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Re: Bright Flame
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 02:34:29 PM AEST
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Admittedly love poems are my favorite. Maybe because I go in to some kind of hopeful dream state? I don't know but I do know this one is beautiful.
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Re: Bright Flame
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by elle on
Monday, 29th October 2012 @ 09:14:11 AM AEST
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I love. . .
elle :) |
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