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First words
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 07:39:12 AM in AEST
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when I first met my wife
my first words were true
I looked at her & asked
can I keep you
ten years later
no Regret in sight
I still love her dearly
with all of my might
our struggles were hard
but together we stand
its the power of love
& the touch of her hand
when two hearts become one
you feel it inside
the love & laughter
creating the pride
we've been threw hell
there is no doupt
threw the power of love
we found our way out
so no matter what happens
what our lives go threw
for better or worse
I'll always love you
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet)
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2012-10-28 07:39:12]
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Re: First words
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by ValDohren on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 08:01:19 AM AEST
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A lovely poem, very sweet - may I just point out that 'threw' should be spelt "through'. Enjoyed the read.
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Re: First words
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by desire on
Thursday, 15th November 2012 @ 05:26:22 PM AEST
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| this is quite a lovely poem and its nice to see men who openly share the love they have for their wife, kudos my friend thanks for sharing |
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