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Is It Wrong
Contributed by
Kelseigh
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Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 07:37:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Is it wrong? That I hate you?
For everything you did and still do?
Sorry...I guess I'm still sad
Over all the things we could've had
Is it wrong? That I still love you as well?
I remember all the times you called me Kel...
And how I only let you call me that
But now that you're gone...I feel like crap
I hope you know I'm sorry for all I've done
You should be apologizing because you're the one
The one...I can't stop thinking about
And it makes me want to shout
I know we're no longer on speaking terms
But every day we don't talk my stomach twists & turns
I can't help but wonder if you think of me
Because I think about you more then I need
Thinking of you makes me want to cry
But I hold my tears back...well...at least I try
I learned from others...I've got to stay strong
but I still love you...Is it wrong?
Copyright ©
Kelseigh
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2012-10-27 19:37:23]
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Re: Is It Wrong
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by Rylo on
Saturday, 27th October 2012 @ 07:49:42 PM AEST
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| Very nice piece of writing and feelings very well played. Sometimes we get so mad at others although hate is such a strong word. But the love we carry inside and our hearts on our sleeves, will always outshine and outdo any hurt that comes our way. |
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Re: Is It Wrong
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by NikaShortyyCakeFolsom on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 12:23:21 AM AEST
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| well said my friend well said |
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Re: Is It Wrong
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by Facade on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 01:19:05 AM AEST
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| Nice write. A lost love is an open wound. |
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Re: Is It Wrong
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by ValDohren on
Sunday, 28th October 2012 @ 07:40:32 AM AEST
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| To lose love is always heartbreaking, but we usually get over it in time - nice write, well penned. |
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Re: Is It Wrong
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by LetYourFeelingsOut on
Monday, 29th October 2012 @ 11:19:26 AM AEST
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| Very well done this brought back memories for me :) |
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Re: Is It Wrong
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by OptimisticPessimist on
Saturday, 23rd February 2013 @ 08:51:59 AM AEST
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Hey, babe :) told you I would comment. So who is this about?
Anyway...this was so captivating and heart-tugging that I just wanted to go over there and hug you until you weren't feeling this way anymore. Meh...love you, Girly!
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