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The Love I Felt For Her As I Live Life

Contributed by NightMareShoGun on Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 10:27:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What is this world coming to deaths and war. A beautiful girl in class crying saddened it was alot on her mind. I do my best to cheer her up like the angel i am remembering the death of my father. A tear rolled down on my face as i also started to cry. She started to smile as she touched my face trying to calm me down as i put my hand on her face i felt a sense of pride like i needed to protect her from all harms of the world. God put me in this world for one reason to live my life and to achieve greatness. As we hugged our lips touched i felt a sense of courage. I told myself never let anyone suffer. As we kissed i told her that i will always be there for her. Also she wanted to love me as i loved her i started to cry a sea of tears of what kind of emotions i felt for her. As years go by i still living my life and still having love for the beautiful girl and one thought came into my mind i have to keep her in my arms as long as i can. The Love we felt for one another became strong and powerful. I was thinking of proposing to her but i am only fifteen. So that thought was still in my head, sometimes love can be a strong and powerful force i have to thank god for this power. But as the year go by the beautiful girl past away of breast cancer that was the most shocking moment i ever encountered. I was crying like a thunderstorm raging through a city. But i remember her as years go by, But i still have the love i felt for her as life live on.

Copyright © NightMareShoGun ... [ 2012-10-22 22:27:12]
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Re: The Love I Felt For Her As I Live Life (User Rating: 1 )
by LetYourFeelingsOut on Wednesday, 5th December 2012 @ 12:03:01 PM AEST
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this is such an inspiring peom it almost made me cry you have such a amazing act for writing peotry :)KEEp up the good work !!!

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