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disillusion
Contributed by
Haunted_Moonlight
on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 11:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I seem to always try
To make everything ok
To make everyone see
There can be happiness everyday.
I try to help my friends
Trudge throught their confused minds
Thinking they would do the same
When I exhibit those same signs.
But now I see Im wrong
I see what isnt there
I make myself believe
That somewhere someone cares.
I now realize the truth
That no one's there for me
Why live in a darkened world
Where I see only what I want to see?
Soo Ill leave this depressing life
Add my name to the ever growing list
Finding solace in red rivers
Flowing from open wrists.
Copyright ©
Haunted_Moonlight
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2003-05-11 11:35:00]
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Re: disillusion
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 04:17:00 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc! I just love your name! Great poem too. Reminds me of a friend I have who feels the way you do. Believe it or not, there is always someone somewhere who cares. Blessed Be,
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Re: disillusion
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by afraid_of_fear on
Monday, 12th May 2003 @ 08:58:02 AM AEST
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this is such a sad poem but so well written. the second from last stanza stands out to me the most.
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