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Time Steals.
Contributed by
Bleedthelove
on
Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 07:34:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I am a cynical young lady
A cold machine built from angry parts
Yet somehow....I am a shelter from the cruel world
Everything you strive to be, is everything inside of me
Bleeding all the things you long to see....yet never see
Now I'm removing the moments, good and bad
Removing every moment we've ever had
Familiar faces leave me bitter and lost within the empty spaces
They say time heals...but sometimes it just steals...
Steals the love
So I'm burning these bridges that have already been burned
Decades older, a million lessons learned
Now here I am deleting portions like mental abortions
Yes, I'm killing the life of you and I...
Because old habits die hard, and it's time to say goodbye.
Copyright ©
Bleedthelove
... [
2012-10-16 07:34:11]
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Re: Time Steals.
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 08:58:32 AM AEST
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Luv your unique style.
In credible write.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Time Steals.
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 11:27:03 AM AEST
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True poetry, this passage speaks for it's self.
Elite, flawless and admirable.
Thank you kindly for this gem.
-UNORTHODOX |
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Re: Time Steals.
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by Waynster on
Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 06:45:03 PM AEST
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I found it neat that i posted my poem "Time Thief" Like seconds after you posted yours. I was writing mine maybe at same time you were writing yours, but in different parts of the world. That is crazy! I loved your poem by the way, very good! All i can say is wow. Very deep! Keep up the great writing.
E. Wayne Searles, Author of Poetic Visions From My Soul. |
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Re: Time Steals.
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by northernlights on
Wednesday, 17th October 2012 @ 08:35:58 AM AEST
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| Strong emotional write with an overall feeling of life purification.A bleeding of the heart such that the connection with the reader is real.well written. |
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Re: Time Steals.
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by Kailas on
Wednesday, 17th October 2012 @ 05:16:43 PM AEST
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| Wow this is truly beautiful. You poured a lot of emotion in each line. Thanks for sharing :P |
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Re: Time Steals.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 22nd October 2012 @ 07:33:08 PM AEST
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this was emotionally packed and full of feeling and truth in alot of ways. .loved it awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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