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Things Were Looking Very Down.
Contributed by
RussellReinhardt
on
Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 06:49:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Things were looking very down.
It felt as if my heart was flopping around on the ground.
I wondered if you still love me.
For the truth I could not see.
Then you said “I still love you”
Yes what would you like to do?
My heart did a back flip.
And sailed into the sunset like a graceful ship.
At first light I boarded a plane.
Yes for I had so much to gain.
Far away waiting for me was my true love.
All I could do was bow down and thank God above.
For it was the longest time.
And I had paid for my crime.
Now I have peace.
And on life I have a new lease.
RR
15:10:2011
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2012-10-16 06:49:58]
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Re: Things Were Looking Very Down.
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by UNORTHODOX on
Tuesday, 16th October 2012 @ 11:33:46 AM AEST
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There's nothing We love more than a happy ending.
I am truly happy for you.
What a beautiful story, and the sincerity of this passage is....
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Re: Things Were Looking Very Down.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 17th October 2012 @ 07:31:50 PM AEST
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Great write.
I wish you every thing good.
Blessings,
emy
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