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Love's Defiance
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 09:02:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Breaking bliss upon the skin,
where contours start and love begins,
sinking soft into the mesh,
where never ending sunsets clash,
bold and brash with haunted motion,
tears that fall create an ocean,
sliding deep into elation,
dreams... they pause... in contemplation,
shrouded songs in painted silence,
breaking waves of love's defiance.
Copyright ©
deusdeira
... [
2012-10-11 09:02:33]
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Re: Love's Defiance
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 10:43:04 AM AEST
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Great writing.
huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Love's Defiance
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by iodinelove on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 12:26:23 PM AEST
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| huh, i just changed a word to contours in the piece I just posted. Great minds think alike, eh. anyway, I like it. Keep writing. |
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Re: Love's Defiance
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th October 2012 @ 11:31:24 AM AEST
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| beautiful, especially the opening lines, the first four are gold (not to demerit the rest) |
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Re: Love's Defiance
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 20th October 2012 @ 02:50:29 PM AEST
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That's just how the heart is it's ruled by no one but love it does what it wants and it will take you where dragons fear to tread. Good write
Greetings
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