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Dream World
Contributed by
lonelywolf04
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Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 04:21:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I see the darkness this world holds,
Only in dreams do we see what's behind the blindfolds,
The peace and happiness,
Absence of stress and darkness,
Visions of what we want,
But it's just a mental taunt,
Like memories of those taken to fast,
As if reunited in the past,
Dreams are where hopes and wants lay,
Visions to show you the way,
Life could be,
Without misery,
So dream dream and dream some more,
Then kick open the door,
And let it flood in,
Making the world what it always should of been.
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lonelywolf04
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2012-10-11 04:21:20]
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Re: Dream World
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by emystar on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 08:17:16 AM AEST
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You did great with out help.
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Re: Dream World
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by Ensis718 on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 11:16:11 PM AEST
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| What really caught my eye was the title. But you did great! Reading a poem and commenting is something I rarely do, but I've got to say, the poem speaks volumes. Keep up the good work. Don't lose your inspiration! |
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