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Spellbound
Contributed by
stalkee
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Monday, 8th October 2012 @ 11:25:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It's the falling star
It's a broken heart
It's the skyward rage
on an empty page
It's the empty bed
It's the eyes all red
It's the ghosts instead
crawling in my head
It's the regretting
It's the not forgetting
It's the hell in me
And the spell on me
It's the burning coals
inside a longing soul
It's the breaking bones
against a heart of stone
No one said it would be this way
Never thought I'd see you walk away
Did our truths turn into twisted lies
when you wiped your eyes then said "goodbye"
Copyright ©
stalkee
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2012-10-08 23:25:02]
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Re: Spellbound
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th October 2012 @ 11:29:21 PM AEST
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Sad but great writing.
blessings,
emy |
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Re: Spellbound
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 08:10:40 AM AEST
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the heartbreak sucks but it makes for such awesome inspiration in writing
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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Re: Spellbound
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 10:09:44 PM AEST
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You took your pain and created a master of words. So sorry for your pain, but thanks for sharing your heart with this incredible verse.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: Spellbound
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by lonelywolf04 on
Thursday, 11th October 2012 @ 04:33:00 AM AEST
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| I don't really know what to say other then fantastic write |
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Re: Spellbound
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by RussellReinhardt on
Saturday, 20th October 2012 @ 03:12:21 PM AEST
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I know the feeling but if I may don't give up. True love is not far away. Good write none the less
greetings
RR |
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