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Love Me
Contributed by
foreveryoung
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Monday, 8th October 2012 @ 09:51:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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All I wanted was you to fight for me
For you to reassure me
To show me your heart and prove me your love
That’s all I wanted
But you surrendered to the walls built so high
You didn't break through
Am I guilty? am I to be blamed that I walked away only to be chased
I didn't mean to cause any heartbreak
I guess my silence you did not understand
I didn't mean to make it hard on you
You just had to pull me close and whisper in my ear
The three letter words that every girl wants to hear
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foreveryoung
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2012-10-08 21:51:05]
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Re: Love Me
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th October 2012 @ 11:25:00 PM AEST
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Beautiful work of art.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: Love Me
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by Stalkee on
Monday, 8th October 2012 @ 11:28:15 PM AEST
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Wow. This one really strikes an emotional chord for me because I was in this situation fairly recently. The only difference is that I'm the guy and was on the opposite side of the equation. I'll always be left wondering if it would have made a difference if I had said those words that I so desperately wanted to.
This one was painful to read for me, but only because it was written so wonderfully and I can relate so well to it. Keep up the fantastic work. |
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Re: Love Me
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by thehotshotpoet on
Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 06:16:12 AM AEST
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my friend I dont think I can tell you anything about writing poetry that you dont already know,
your poetry comes from your heart & your words,
that is the two main keys I live by.
your work is beautiful,dont stop anything keep on writing just like you are,if anyone gives you problems to much by cutting down your work let me know & I will help you to create a poem to back them off,it's all in the creative mind,if what you write pleases you then that is what matters the most you are happy with your work so dont change anything.
thank you for sharing
Roy Randolph Andrews AKA (thehotshotpoet) |
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Re: Love Me
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 9th October 2012 @ 10:19:13 PM AEST
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Nice work, I always love a poem that is soulful and deeply emotive and honest, this is it.
Michelle |
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