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Regretting

Contributed by stalkee on Thursday, 4th October 2012 @ 10:06:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



In search of a break
It was a meeting by chance
Escaping the madness from within
There we were upon cement

I don't quite know what was said
But the world started calming down
Your presence became a crystal lake
And my heart was the skipping stone

Then I thought some words
And now I'm wondering if they were true
That I had fallen in love with you

Flash forward then there we were
The burning lights, the crescent moon
The smell of spring, you took my hands
We met our lips and breathed as one

Then we stood on a giant's shoulders
You watched the city lights below
I watched the moon's jealous smile
as its brightness paled to yours

Then I wrote some words
And now I'm wondering if they were true
that I had fallen in love with you

Flash forward again, we're in my car
I could see that look in your eyes
A blaze of passion turned to ash
We forgot how to make it last

Tears rolling like your red hair
I was a man who to turned to stone
With eyes as red as your hair
Suddenly I was a man alone

But now I sing those words
And I know that they are true
I had fallen in love with you




Copyright © stalkee ... [ 2012-10-04 22:06:01]
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Re: Regretting (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 4th October 2012 @ 11:13:29 PM AEST
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Real good writing.
Blessings,
emy


Re: Regretting (User Rating: 1 )
by thehotshotpoet on Saturday, 6th October 2012 @ 05:52:05 AM AEST
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I truly like this
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet




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