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My destiny
Contributed by
JOSEJAD
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Wednesday, 3rd October 2012 @ 08:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Pain
Misery
Is it my destiny?
It is for me
Such agony
Today sadness and my life
Are In perfect harmony
Fused together
In matrimony
As Depression wakes
Happiness sleeps o so peacefully
Days of feeling not good enough
And transparency
Knowing fighting with emotions
Is a dictatorship not diplomacy
Not realizing the person who is
At fault is me
The person feeling sad
is me
Me is the person letting people
get to me
Me is the one crying
For me just to be
Me is not acting like me
Pain
Misery
Is it my destiny?
No not for ME!
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JOSEJAD
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2012-10-03 20:34:22]
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Re: My destiny
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 3rd October 2012 @ 09:37:15 PM AEST
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Great message in this awesome write. It's not easy to change from negative thinking but you;ve made the biggest step. I'm speaking from experience.
hang tuff, blessings, huggs
emy |
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Re: My destiny
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by deusdeira on
Thursday, 4th October 2012 @ 01:32:08 PM AEST
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| habits are hard to break, make sure to say positive things on purpose, until it becomes a habit. Things like "its beautiful out here" or think about the things you love. Habit is what really creates happiness. |
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Re: My destiny
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 4th October 2012 @ 10:14:29 PM AEST
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| I loved how this poem ended. It would have been easy to end it on a sad note, but you managed to pull out a strong, hopeful ending and I respect that a lot. There's nothing harder than having someone that's close to us begin bringing us down and causing us pain. Hope you find a way out of your sadness and find happiness! |
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Re: My destiny
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by workinprogress on
Friday, 5th October 2012 @ 10:40:54 PM AEST
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| Love this poem! It is difficult at times to be mindful that I am responsible for how I feel. And it feels so liberating when you can choose to shift an uncomfortable feeling into a comfortable one. Thanks for sharing this! |
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Re: My destiny
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 6th October 2012 @ 06:03:35 AM AEST
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the only one who can change the way you feel is you & there is no doupt you will overcome these feelings.
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet |
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