|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
The Critic of needs
Contributed by
LilDrifter
on
Sunday, 30th September 2012 @ 01:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
|
A quality of beauty, intensity of emotion.
An expression of feelings, a poets devotion.
More than just words, that occasionally rhyme.
More than technique, this art needs time.
Time for one, to dig so very deep.
Moment for that soul to bare and weep.
So when I think ‘poetry’, this is what I think of.
Not ‘technique’, but the labour of love.
Love for my art, my words of release.
World of my own, tranquility and peace.
So when you correct, my punctuation and grammar.
‘Improving’ my flaws, you critical shammer.
When you amend my foolish blunders.
Maybe you should consider, these words hold wonders.
Spitting out words, so vicious and bitter.
Words of no purpose, a babble, a witter.
I continue to share, my rhythm of flaws.
A rhythm you will not break, with your rhythm of laws.
So criticises my friend, if that fulfils your needs.
As you will not disheartening, my art of deeds.
Copyright ©
LilDrifter
... [
2012-09-30 13:04:07]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: The Critic of needs
(User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on
Sunday, 30th September 2012 @ 02:55:32 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Your first verse says it all, now that's beautiful poetry, straight from the heart full of soul beautifully expressed and connects leaving the warmth of recognition. |
|
|
Re: The Critic of needs
(User Rating: 1 )
by thezenmonkey on
Monday, 1st October 2012 @ 08:15:22 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Beautiful
And very clever. |
|
|
Re: The Critic of needs
(User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on
Sunday, 14th October 2012 @ 06:04:40 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| i thoroughly enjoyed reading that :) i'm gonna read your other poems now :p |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
