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Waking Up Empty

Contributed by Ensis718 on Wednesday, 26th September 2012 @ 06:14:19 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

It was sudden, unexpected.

She had woken up to a bed with no on beside her,
Even though she knew someone was suppose to be there.

At first,
She wondered,
“Was it all a dream?”

She wondered,
“Was Sabrina really here?”

She received no answer.

Only silence.

She escaped to her room
And huddled
Onto the wooden floor.

Fear encased her heart,
Worry weighed down her mind,
And once again,
She has woken up
To find a best friend and loyal companion,
Gone.

Gone, Gone, Gone!

Tears rolled down her cheeks,
And even though she knew it wasn’t appropriate
Since it was just one little thing
That she shouldn’t get so worried about,
She had to let it out.

A howl,
So horrible, so full of anguish
Escaped her mouth,
Escaped her room.

But no one was there to listen
As she poured her tears
Over spilt milk.

Though what others would see was just a little thing
To her, it was more.

She was reliving the most dreaded moments of her younger life,
Those accursed moments that ruined everything!

A dog
A cage
Tears
Empty
Loss
Therapy.

Fear encased her heart,
Worry weighed down her mind,
And once again,
She has woken up
To find a best friend and loyal companion,
Gone.

A piercing wail shook the room,
And she huddled onto the wooden floor
Sobbing her heart out
For the loss she experienced back then,
And the emptiness and fear she felt
Having to feel that similar loss again
When she woke up to nothing
And no one.

Copyright Â© Ensis718 ... [ 2012-09-26 18:14:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Waking Up Empty (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 26th September 2012 @ 10:41:01 PM AEST
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I can relate.
so sad but remarkable writing.
Blessings, huggs, prayer,
emy

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