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I Can See it
Contributed by
Mikki
on
Saturday, 22nd September 2012 @ 12:50:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can feel the shadows taking thoughts from deep inside
I can feel their poison sinking far into my mind
I can hear the little girl, so innocent, so sweet
I can taste the venom in the few things I do eat
I can hear them calling me, my name upon their tongues
I can feel them all around me, filling up my lungs
I can feel their every breath, so warm upon my skin
I can feel their vicious souls appearing from within
I can feel it, I can hear it, right in front of me
Why do you ignore it? You are not the one who sees…
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Mikki
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2012-09-22 00:50:32]
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Re: I Can See it
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Monday, 24th September 2012 @ 09:34:12 AM AEST
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Hi,
Yes, you're right, we can't see it - at least not
as clearly as you do, but we do try to
understand the anguish that you and others
with bipolar go through.
I admire your courage in putting this poem
together, my friend. It becomes more clear
now to those of us who struggle to
understand.
God bless.
Tommy
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Re: I Can See it
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by MichaelM93 on
Monday, 1st October 2012 @ 04:36:38 AM AEST
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| I almost got chills. Kudos for writing it down. |
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