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What a mess:
Contributed by
richard_campbell
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Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 09:17:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Am just a mess
failing every TEST.
just look at all this mess
i have cause my family/friends
thats why i must CONFESS
yes! i did it, i did it ALL.
no need to lie now
i made this great FALL.
now am looking up
and see where i should BE.
i blame no one else
for where i should have BEEN. .
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richard_campbell
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2012-09-21 09:17:26]
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Re: What a mess:
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by dvtpdw on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 12:52:32 PM AEST
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| I like the way your words tell us that with each down, there's always an up. A positive outlook. Great write. Thank you for sharing, P |
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Re: What a mess:
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by emystar on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 07:10:53 PM AEST
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Very moving write my friend.
There's only one way up' and that's Jesus Christ. .
That's a great place to be
Good writing.
Blessings,
emy |
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