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Hollow beat
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Thursday, 20th September 2012 @ 03:02:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A thud within my splintered chest,
the beating of my heart?
no i say... it cannot be...
i've lost that fragile spark,
sink oh ship.. don't sail again,
the lightning comes to strike,
let fire burn and brimstone hail,
let darkness block the light,
Set aflame this hollow husk,
this shade of what once was,
let perish all this distant thought,
and grind it into dust,
let mountains rest upon its grave,
deep within the ground,
i never want to hear its beat...
this hollow empty sound.
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deusdeira
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2012-09-20 03:02:39]
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Re: Hollow beat
(User Rating: 1 )
by ammar on
Thursday, 20th September 2012 @ 06:01:33 AM AEST
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A captivating poem, rich in imagery, with an element of suspense.
Keep writing |
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Re: Hollow beat
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by spud on
Friday, 21st September 2012 @ 10:10:43 AM AEST
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Hi,
Yes, it sometimes feels exactly like that.
Well versed. A fine write.
T
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