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Wonderful World
Contributed by
thehotshotpoet
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Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 07:28:52 AM in AEST
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I awake every morning
& as I roll out of my bed
the most amazing thoughts
are Running threw my head
what a beautiful life I have
& what a wonderful life I live
it is my inspiration
to give all that I can give
allthough my life is full of pain
I look past what I can feel
I seem to find the beauty
most say it is unreal
I'm living in a dream world
where all is what you see
it might not be as real to you
but it truly is to me
what a beautiful world
where your dreams are all your own
enjoy them in privacy
or you can make them known
we choose what we remember
we control what we forget
some will one day understand
& some will learn Regret
the heart & mind work as one
creating what we dream
so we will have a story
that noone has ever seen
take the one's of laughter
they might be here a while
or choose the most meaningfull one's
the one's that made you smile
it is the only difference
this world can really see
it defines who we are
from who we thought we would be
the hot shot poet
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Re: Wonderful World
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 10:23:37 AM AEST
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Makes sense to me.
Good work, friend.
Huggs, blessings,
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Re: Wonderful World
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by desire on
Tuesday, 18th September 2012 @ 11:35:00 PM AEST
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This is a really nice poem and I can relate
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Re: Wonderful World
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by Waynster on
Wednesday, 19th September 2012 @ 04:33:16 PM AEST
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This poem is awesome. How does it not make any sense? It makes all the sense in the world! It is exactly to the point about things in life, not only yours, but the human life in general. You too have a gift of insight, which there are many people in this world that don't have.
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