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Child
Contributed by
tica
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Monday, 17th September 2012 @ 12:40:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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child of death and life
child of happiness and sadness
child of darkness and light
Lilith watches you by night
Angel guard you by day
sleep tight
the night beckons you
the light hates you
so sleep child sleep
the night beckons
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tica
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2012-09-17 00:40:07]
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Re: Child
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by northernlights on
Monday, 17th September 2012 @ 02:24:26 AM AEST
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| What can create a better medium for fear than the mixture of dark and light symbolised within the character of legend Lilith, a character I never knew about before but has been fascinating to discover through your work.Dramatic in its brevity,effective in its introduction to innocence guarded by evil,and chilling in the concept of evil being part of the light as with lucifer! |
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Re: Child
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by Archie on
Monday, 17th September 2012 @ 12:48:29 PM AEST
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| This to me is the state of being kids start out in "scared of the dark and the shadows of the future" A lullaby in my opinion is about sheltering and comforting. I like the realistic view though. |
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Re: Child
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by MichaelM93 on
Monday, 1st October 2012 @ 04:34:57 AM AEST
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| This is fantastic. Love that it's not your typical lullaby. |
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