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U.G.L.Y.
Contributed by
jennyjen
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Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 10:17:05 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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Mirror shatters
Duckling of a monster
Face of years
Body unknown to the world
Hair like worms
“Move out the way ugly”
Look into these eyes
Do they really hurt like pain?
Skin so rough, its such a heartache
Tears run down like the rain
Moonlight strikes and the nightmare begins
I am the definition
I am the truth
I am the ugly!
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jennyjen
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2012-09-14 22:17:05]
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Re: U.G.L.Y.
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th September 2012 @ 04:37:22 AM AEST
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Your writing is good but I'm sure you are not ugly.
If someone is making you feel this way then they are the one with the problem.
Big huggs, blessings, prayer,
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Re: U.G.L.Y.
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by thehotshotpoet on
Saturday, 15th September 2012 @ 06:08:23 AM AEST
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i must agree with emystar on this one if someone is making you feel that way then they have issues to deal with,i hope you figure it out,
thanks for sharing
the hot shot poet
beauty is in the eye of the beholder & if your beholder is making you feel ugly in any way then there is a problem with the way they see you,good luck to you, |
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Re: U.G.L.Y.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 30th September 2012 @ 12:55:10 PM AEST
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| I can tell there is anger here as well, in your poem. But God made you the way he made you and you are not ugly. |
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