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Escape
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Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 05:23:22 PM in AEST
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I want to disappear,
to let the hopeless feeling in me clear,
My wish is to fly away,
and never see another day.
Always crying,
the inside of my dying.
My heart completely empty,
never feeling happy.
They always watch every move I make,
my smile I give, always fake.
I should never let myself get overheated,
nor let myself be mistreated.
But the cost of this seems great,
every single person so full of hate.
So hear I stay and follow their every need,
as I let the inside of me bleed.
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Re: Escape
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by emystar on
Saturday, 15th September 2012 @ 04:53:54 AM AEST
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This write is very touching but so sad.
I hope you change your life 'cause who ever doesn't deserve some one like you.
Huggs, Blessings,
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Re: Escape
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 16th September 2012 @ 02:22:48 AM AEST
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This is true as poetry and sad and distant and tortured though well written.
I hope you aren't always sad and distant.
Black days I have, want to wash the day clean, but with what.
All these emotions, and truth behind them, people share.
Keep writing. It does do you well to speak.
Thank you. I think are a talented writer. Explore and Escape.
Peace!
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