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Stone
Contributed by
deusdeira
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Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 04:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Riding upon drifting waves,
forever more the current's slave,
Forced to push...taught not to pull,
the tide will crush... you cannot fold,
gripped by strings the eye can't see,
with only stone to set you free,
you will hear a distant sound,
just a whisper... yet profound,
of freedom from the whispered lie,
the truth and love you've been denied,
cold and lifeless... your display,
such a bleakness... harsh and gray,
and yet within the deepest stone...
I can see... your heart still roams,
what cause... what hate... what cold remorse,
has made you want to take this course,
oh sad confusion... cold disdain,
If only I could melt your pain,
Thick rope they tie... around your neck,
and the only freedom... is in death.
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deusdeira
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2012-09-14 04:01:30]
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Re: Stone
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 12:19:18 PM AEST
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| That is so damn sad. :( Admittedly makes one curious what she is going through and obviously none of our business but I can definitely relate to the desire to melt someone's pain away. Great words from a compassionate poet. |
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Re: Stone
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 14th September 2012 @ 12:32:26 PM AEST
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this is really sad
like how you wrote it......
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Re: Stone
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by lisamary on
Saturday, 15th September 2012 @ 12:06:35 AM AEST
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| That is such a lovely poem. |
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